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RE: Character Critique? Please |
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07-23-2013, 09:02 PM
Double post I know, but BAH HUMBUG, so here's a quick little write up after taking the time to reflect on your own post, I didn't touch on a few key aspects but I put my own questions below.

To be honest, I'm not that familiar with Hyuran lore so I can't say for certain, but I don't think they would necessarily look down on you for being of mixed blood. For the Elezen on the other hand, I think it would be more of a "pity" for some one who doesn't fully fit in. (Particularly if you we're a Duskwight mixture and if it is physically evident.)

Breaking away from the Garlean empire I imagine is quite the event, (particularly since its been shown through some quests that common Garlean soldiers are brain washed to a certain extent.). Have you thought about expanding on the escape with Ginner and Gizmo? Perhaps they were airship workers or some kind of role allowing them to operate somewhat independently and promote your escape? The implications of them being outsiders opens up the avenue to a myriad of potential endings to that route.

A few follow up questions,
Have you had the chance to peruse the wiki much? There's an ongoing fleshing out of information there which I think may help provide more context to the Garlean empire for you to pull from, as well, if you search "Garlean citizenship" you should be able to find the listing of other characters who have like you fled the Empire and their stories might provide some brain food for your own.

Have you had the chance to play in the Beta yet to roll an appearance for your character? The physical attributes (at least for me) can determine how much exposure/flak your character gets as a "half"

Was there any particular area you were looking for critique over all? Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns,

Hope this helps and Best of luck in Eorzea.
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Character Critique? Please - by Remx - 07-23-2013, 05:42 PM
RE: Character Critique? Please - by Olofantur - 07-23-2013, 05:48 PM
RE: Character Critique? Please - by Olofantur - 07-23-2013, 09:02 PM
RE: Character Critique? Please - by Grinner - 07-23-2013, 10:35 PM
RE: Character Critique? Please - by FreelanceWizard - 07-23-2013, 09:11 PM
RE: Character Critique? Please - by Remx - 07-23-2013, 10:18 PM

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