Really liked the last two lines. The "it would seem" is really great understatement. Due to the shortness of the lines, I kept wanting them to rhyme. That's more about the sheer amount Pope I've had to read. Thank you for sharing.

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07-28-2013, 05:08 PM
Really liked the last two lines. The "it would seem" is really great understatement. Due to the shortness of the lines, I kept wanting them to rhyme. That's more about the sheer amount Pope I've had to read. Thank you for sharing.
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