Well, the background is a bit bareboned, but nothing life-threatening or extremely lore disrupting.
You might want to come up for a reason for her current name. Other characters might think it's strange for someone to not follow conventions and ask about it, so it's best for you to prepare to have an IC reason for it. Being raised for Roegadyn would work well if the name followed Roegadyn conventions. But since that is not the case, you'll have to come with something else.
These are some questions that sprung to mind when reading the bio. While it's not imperative for you to have answers for all or any of them, I think you should ponder about them. They will help you flesh her history a bit more:
-Where did she and her foster family live? Was it in the city, a village? In the wilderness? And if so, was there any civilization close by?
-Were they part of a larger community, like a clan or a village? If so, can you describe it briefly?
-What do her foster parents do for a living?
-Where did she learn martial arts? Is she self-taught? Did she had a teacher? And if she had, who was he? Is he significant?
-How and why did she lose her memory? (You don't need to write this in the public biography, but you should know the answer)
-Who are her real parents? Is it significant who they were? IE. do you intend, as a player, for it to ever come up?
You might want to come up for a reason for her current name. Other characters might think it's strange for someone to not follow conventions and ask about it, so it's best for you to prepare to have an IC reason for it. Being raised for Roegadyn would work well if the name followed Roegadyn conventions. But since that is not the case, you'll have to come with something else.
These are some questions that sprung to mind when reading the bio. While it's not imperative for you to have answers for all or any of them, I think you should ponder about them. They will help you flesh her history a bit more:
-Where did she and her foster family live? Was it in the city, a village? In the wilderness? And if so, was there any civilization close by?
-Were they part of a larger community, like a clan or a village? If so, can you describe it briefly?
-What do her foster parents do for a living?
-Where did she learn martial arts? Is she self-taught? Did she had a teacher? And if she had, who was he? Is he significant?
-How and why did she lose her memory? (You don't need to write this in the public biography, but you should know the answer)
-Who are her real parents? Is it significant who they were? IE. do you intend, as a player, for it to ever come up?
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