I've reworked Chiyo's history quite a bit. I hope it makes more sense to you.
On a side note, how does anyone feel about ex-Garlean Empire members? (regarding my second character)
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SpoilerName: Chiyo Hoshi
Orginally: C'sonjha Hoshi
Nickname: Chi
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Race: Miqo'te, Seeker of the Sun
Appearance:
-Skin: Darkish
-Eyes: Red
-Hair: Short, but spiky, purple.
-Build: Athletic
-Height: 5'7
-Tail: Medium-long (but often wiped around her waist while she's active)
Birthplace: Born in Limsa Lominsa, but raised in the deserts of Aldenard.
Birth date: Uncertain
Family: Adopted and raised by Hellsguards most of her life. Her real parents died when she was around the age of 3. Her father fell ill before she was even born while her mother died in battle when fighting the Garlean Empire.
-Sightless Sunrise: A roegadyn monk that adopted Chi just before her mother died.
-Starry Laurel: The sister of Sightlessand one of Chiyo's guardians.
Favored class/job (in order):
Pugilist, Lancer, Conjurer
Personally: Outgoing, confident,and courageous. She is willing to stick up for her friends and those around her. She's willing to accept most challenges, but is sometimes careless and overestimates herself. She rarely gets too angry, but when she does...
Sexuality: Bisexual, but strongly favors females, in a way.
Background History:
V'ebaloh Hoshi had her duties as an Eorzean solider to protect her home, and as a mother to protect her daughter. Nearly two months after the birthday of C'sonjha Hoshi, she requested that her Roegadyn friend, Sightless Sunrise, would take care of her for the time being just before her next mission. It was later that V'ebaloh Hoshi was confirmed 'killed in action,' by a surprised Garlean attack.
Ever since, Sightless had raised the young Miqo'te with the help of his sister, Starry Laurel, changing her name to Chiyo Hoshi.
Throughout her childhood, Sightless and Starry had taught Chi the ways of fighting and hunting. At first, it was difficult for her. Her guardians were strict and sometimes even harsh with her. At the time, Chiyo was somewhat of a cry-baby and often wished to be with her real parents. But Sightless intended for her to be strong. Eventually, he told her the tragic truth about her mother's demise, which slowly drove Chiyo to be more determined. She was mostly trained in the ways of the pugilist. Sightless was a monk while Starry was a warrior.
Chiyo had significantly less eduction than usual, barely at a middle school level. Outside of physical training, she was taught basic crafting and socialized with few friends. Chiyo was mostly home-schooled by Starry though it was slightly less significant than that of her training. As she progressed, her guardians became more outgoing in her pre-teen and teen years, allowing her a more 'carefree' personality.
Ataround the age of 18, Chiyo had set off on her own in hopes of furthering her training and see how strong she can get, and perhaps one day, avenge her mother.
Likes: Hunting, sparring, food(she really likes to eat), parties, riding chocobos.
Dislikes: Being provoked,cowardliness, having her tail pulled.
Orginally: C'sonjha Hoshi
Nickname: Chi
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Race: Miqo'te, Seeker of the Sun
Appearance:
-Skin: Darkish
-Eyes: Red
-Hair: Short, but spiky, purple.
-Build: Athletic
-Height: 5'7
-Tail: Medium-long (but often wiped around her waist while she's active)
Birthplace: Born in Limsa Lominsa, but raised in the deserts of Aldenard.
Birth date: Uncertain
Family: Adopted and raised by Hellsguards most of her life. Her real parents died when she was around the age of 3. Her father fell ill before she was even born while her mother died in battle when fighting the Garlean Empire.
-Sightless Sunrise: A roegadyn monk that adopted Chi just before her mother died.
-Starry Laurel: The sister of Sightlessand one of Chiyo's guardians.
Favored class/job (in order):
Pugilist, Lancer, Conjurer
Personally: Outgoing, confident,and courageous. She is willing to stick up for her friends and those around her. She's willing to accept most challenges, but is sometimes careless and overestimates herself. She rarely gets too angry, but when she does...
Sexuality: Bisexual, but strongly favors females, in a way.
Background History:
V'ebaloh Hoshi had her duties as an Eorzean solider to protect her home, and as a mother to protect her daughter. Nearly two months after the birthday of C'sonjha Hoshi, she requested that her Roegadyn friend, Sightless Sunrise, would take care of her for the time being just before her next mission. It was later that V'ebaloh Hoshi was confirmed 'killed in action,' by a surprised Garlean attack.
Ever since, Sightless had raised the young Miqo'te with the help of his sister, Starry Laurel, changing her name to Chiyo Hoshi.
Throughout her childhood, Sightless and Starry had taught Chi the ways of fighting and hunting. At first, it was difficult for her. Her guardians were strict and sometimes even harsh with her. At the time, Chiyo was somewhat of a cry-baby and often wished to be with her real parents. But Sightless intended for her to be strong. Eventually, he told her the tragic truth about her mother's demise, which slowly drove Chiyo to be more determined. She was mostly trained in the ways of the pugilist. Sightless was a monk while Starry was a warrior.
Chiyo had significantly less eduction than usual, barely at a middle school level. Outside of physical training, she was taught basic crafting and socialized with few friends. Chiyo was mostly home-schooled by Starry though it was slightly less significant than that of her training. As she progressed, her guardians became more outgoing in her pre-teen and teen years, allowing her a more 'carefree' personality.
Ataround the age of 18, Chiyo had set off on her own in hopes of furthering her training and see how strong she can get, and perhaps one day, avenge her mother.
Likes: Hunting, sparring, food(she really likes to eat), parties, riding chocobos.
Dislikes: Being provoked,cowardliness, having her tail pulled.
