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RE: You're Not Writing A Novel |
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09-30-2013, 04:20 PM
Agreed.  I am always pretty iffy when people do this, because I just don't know if they're doing it as an "in".  I try not to act on internal feelings or thoughts like that, but if I know it's meant to grab people, I may try to work with it in -some- way.

The aspect of this that bothers me is there's usually things tacked on that are insulting to a person, or people around them.  I have all too often seen people emote thinking and such, that is designed to let everyone know how unimportant they consider another character.  ICly, we can't react to this, but it has displayed to all present that so and so thinks so and so is stupid, or ugly, or whatever.

Personally, when I emote something along the lines of a thought or a feeling, I will include 2 key elements.  The first is for the player behind the character, so that -they- can become interested if they wish.  The second is a hook for the character themself to act on, if the player decides to do so.  Its just safer.  There's really more to it, but yea, with so many different people with different styles, it's better to play it safe.  Something visual, audible, etc that the character could have picked up.  For example, the one you used about being lost.

*Bob enters the room, feeling lost, and approaches the counter, ringing the bell to get the shopkeeps attention.*

This is the "wrong" way, right?  Yes and no.  It is, because you're not not giving anyone a hook, and you're not being specific enough.  Your character is -feeling- lost, but where does it go from there?  How much, if any, is he showing that outwardly?  If someone is paying attention, it's not impossible that they could notice that he's feeling lost, even if you didn't emote it specifically.  People show what they're feeling.  But by not being specific, we don't know if you meant for there to be an "in" or not.  So while it may not necessarily be "wrong", it's a rather poor way to do it.

*Bob enters the room, clearly appearing uneasy.  He looks around the room, his head moving from one corner to the other, eyes darting about.  It's fairly clear that he is unfamiliar with the area.  He looks back ahead, eyes fixed on the counter, and moves swiftly to it, ringing the bell.*

Same character, same scenario.  Bob is still feeling lost, but this time, we know for sure he has some sort of issue that anyone present can pick up, and react to.  Much better way to do it, in my opinion.

Oh, I forgot to put this above, so I'll tack it on here.  Too often, I see people -reacting- on things they couldn't realistically react to, as if every character is so perceptive, and their senses are so finely honed...  It's silly.

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You're Not Writing A Novel - by DAISHI - 09-30-2013, 03:53 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by IncubusManatee - 09-30-2013, 04:01 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by FreelanceWizard - 09-30-2013, 04:15 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by IncubusManatee - 09-30-2013, 04:24 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by FreelanceWizard - 09-30-2013, 04:33 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Gideon Aryeh - 09-30-2013, 08:21 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by cuideag - 09-30-2013, 09:17 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by K'nahli - 09-30-2013, 04:10 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Gray - 09-30-2013, 04:20 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by DAISHI - 09-30-2013, 04:29 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by BlessedSilence - 09-30-2013, 05:53 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by DAISHI - 10-01-2013, 12:34 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Katanyae - 09-30-2013, 04:41 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Faye - 09-30-2013, 05:29 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by K'dath - 09-30-2013, 05:36 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Faye - 09-30-2013, 05:40 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by K'dath - 09-30-2013, 05:49 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Faye - 09-30-2013, 06:00 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Katanyae - 09-30-2013, 07:18 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Karaan - 09-30-2013, 05:55 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Rosekitten - 09-30-2013, 06:22 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Sigyn Shieldbreaker - 09-30-2013, 06:28 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Fystrael Abylstyrwyn - 09-30-2013, 06:42 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Sigyn Shieldbreaker - 09-30-2013, 06:53 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by ArmachiA - 09-30-2013, 07:32 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by K'dath - 09-30-2013, 08:55 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by ArmachiA - 10-01-2013, 12:18 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Cato - 09-30-2013, 07:32 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Katanyae - 09-30-2013, 09:09 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by K'dath - 09-30-2013, 09:36 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Katanyae - 09-30-2013, 10:59 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Katanyae - 09-30-2013, 11:04 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by IncubusManatee - 10-01-2013, 10:18 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Ildur - 09-30-2013, 08:58 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Lament - 09-30-2013, 09:34 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Faye - 09-30-2013, 09:47 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Nnejo - 09-30-2013, 11:04 PM
You Must Be Mistaken! - by Tobias Nightbringer - 09-30-2013, 11:07 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Cato - 09-30-2013, 11:10 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Faye - 09-30-2013, 11:37 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Naunet - 10-01-2013, 12:12 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Faye - 10-01-2013, 12:14 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Lament - 10-01-2013, 04:26 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Cato - 10-01-2013, 12:19 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Faye - 10-01-2013, 01:12 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by FreelanceWizard - 10-01-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Katanyae - 10-01-2013, 06:25 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Faye - 10-01-2013, 06:29 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Katanyae - 10-01-2013, 06:31 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Alothia - 10-01-2013, 07:26 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Faye - 10-01-2013, 07:46 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Alothia - 10-01-2013, 07:54 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Katanyae - 10-01-2013, 10:25 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Cato - 10-01-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Katanyae - 10-01-2013, 12:41 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Cato - 10-01-2013, 01:08 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by ArmachiA - 10-01-2013, 12:30 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Gideon Aryeh - 10-01-2013, 03:32 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Daca'li Molkoh - 10-01-2013, 04:31 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by ryanxwonbin - 10-01-2013, 04:37 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by K'dath - 10-01-2013, 08:31 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Asyria - 10-01-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Asyria - 10-01-2013, 10:32 AM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Clover - 10-01-2013, 01:14 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Aeslyn Grey - 10-01-2013, 01:39 PM
RE: You're Not Writing A Novel - by Alothia - 10-01-2013, 02:18 PM

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