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The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge]

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Lady Whiteraven Lady Whiteraven Find all posts by this user The White Knight of Ishgard Posts:226 Joined:Sep 2013 Character:Lady Whiteraven Linkshell:Multiple Server:Coeurl Reputation: 19 Timezone:UTC-6 RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] | #2 10-15-2013, 09:21 AM Your descriptions are lovely and quite vivid. My only critique is that you filled it with so many lovely images that I feel like I only got a couple seconds of actual story.

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The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Tobias Nightbringer - 10-15-2013, 07:50 AM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Lady Whiteraven - 10-15-2013, 09:21 AM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Brave - 10-15-2013, 09:46 AM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Desmond Aryll - 10-15-2013, 10:28 AM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Tobias Nightbringer - 10-15-2013, 02:32 PM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Desmond Aryll - 10-15-2013, 02:54 PM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Tobias Nightbringer - 10-17-2013, 05:33 AM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Lament - 10-18-2013, 03:48 AM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Tobias Nightbringer - 10-18-2013, 02:10 PM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Lament - 10-18-2013, 03:30 PM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Vito - 10-18-2013, 04:21 PM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Desmond Aryll - 10-18-2013, 04:34 PM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Tobias Nightbringer - 10-19-2013, 03:02 PM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Lady Whiteraven - 10-19-2013, 03:32 PM RE: The Dance [Story/OOC Comments and Critique STRONGLY Encouraged] [Song Challenge] - by Tobias Nightbringer - 10-23-2013, 02:09 PM

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