Beautiful, utterly beautiful. I found myself quickly immersed by the tone and atmosphere that was set. There might be a one technical issue that I'll bring up in PM but nothing so jarring that I could not enjoy how wonderfully this was written.Â
Pacing was great, details were enough to present a vivid image to the reader (at least to me). If only I could hold a candle to this kind of fine writing!
Pacing was great, details were enough to present a vivid image to the reader (at least to me). If only I could hold a candle to this kind of fine writing!