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The Void - A poem
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The Void - A poem |
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07-28-2013, 12:27 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-28-2013, 12:28 PM by Flamel Eldgamel.)
This is a short poem written by Flamel. It is based off of the short times when he slips consciously into the Void. When this happens, he remains motionless, staring; completely oblivious to anything around him. Nothing stirs him until he comes back himself. These 'excursions' are one of his main reasons for researching Black Magic.

The Void


I fall in once more,
to the black emptiness.
No light shines,
or pierces the darkness.
I hear the screams.
I hear the cries.
Of things unknown,
and hidden from my eyes.
They are there, watching;
every move I make.
But the fear keeps me still,
with every breath I take.
I close my eyes,
and pray it a dream.
But prayers go unanswered
in The Void, it would seem.

Be gentle...

I close my eyes,
and pray it a dream.
But prayers go unanswered
in The Void, it would seem.


An Excerpt from
The Void
By: Flamel Eldgamel

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RE: The Void - A poem |
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07-28-2013, 02:39 PM
Really nice. I reminds me of the first moments of the game where your character is floating in the darkness.
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07-28-2013, 05:08 PM
Really liked the last two lines. The "it would seem" is really great understatement. Due to the shortness of the lines, I kept wanting them to rhyme. That's more about the sheer amount Pope I've had to read. Thank you for sharing. Big Grin
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07-30-2013, 08:44 AM
I too really like the last stanza/last 4 lines. Great work! Smile

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