Been poking around here lately and was advised to come out here for advice. Looking for critisism but please keep in mind, i am a fresh player; only been playing a week. so please go easy on me! >w<
Using this detailed sheet i came across in the threads
THE BASICS:
Character name: Uzali Uyagir
Nickname:
Origin of Nickname:
Birthdate: 20th Sun of the 6th Astral Moon
Place of Birth: (not sure where i should say. She's an Au Ra Xaela)
Ethnicity: Au RA
Religion: Non-religious
Height: 6" 3'
Weight: Slim.
Body type: Fit. Toned but not overly muscular.
Eye color: Red
Glasses or Vision Enhancements:
Skin tone (pale, tan, olive, brown, etc): Dark blue
Face shape: (round, square, oval, chubby, heart-shaped):Â
Prominent features:
Tattoos or distinguishing marks: Scar on left eye.
Casting choice (what actor do they resemble?):
General health:
Disabilities, illnesses, or weaknesses: None.
Fashion and style (what do they wear, how do they wear it?): (havent been able to decide on an outfit.
Special jewelry: None.
Hair color: Blue
Hairstyle: Smooth and long.
Grooming: Brushed and washed regularly.
Additional information:
COMMUNICATION SKILLS:
Languages spoken: Common and native language.
Accent or dialect: No outstanding accent.
Vocabulary/reading level: Educated.
Voice tone: Mature.
Favorite phrases: "Call a pebble a boulder long enough, and it will believe."
Do they curse: Yes, freely.
Demeanor: Blunt and to the point, but caring and sociable.
Mannerisms: Usually very calm and mature.
Gestures:
Habitual behaviors (nail-biting, drumming fingers, hair fixing, etc.):
Posture: Strong, straight posture.
PROFESSIONAL INFO:
Current occupation: Traveler, Blacksmith/armorer.
Level of job satisfaction: High.
Years at current occupation:
Income:
Professional skills:
Combat skills: Years of honed endurance and physical strength.
PERSONAL RELATIONSHIPS:
Marital status: Single
Significant partner(s): None
How did they meet partner:
Nickname for partner:
Previous romantic partners:
Children: None
Relationship with children:
Step-children:
How does the character relate to:
Spouse:
Lover:
Past lovers/spouses:
Children:
Friends: Respectful and friendly.
Employer: Professional and to the point.
Underlings:
Minions:
Pets: Gentle and caring.
Strangers:
Opposite sex: Flirtatious.
Same sex:
Family members:
Competitors:
Authority:
Enemies: Threatening and aggressive
Additional information:
CHARACTER PERSONALITY AND PSYCHOLOGY:
What do they love: Bellows of the furnace, battle, romance.
What is their passion: Furthering her skills.
What do they hate: Sitting around doing nothing for long periods of time.
What would they die for: To leave her mark and ensure a better place.
What do they value: Reliability
Secret loves: Sweets.
Sexual behavior:Â promiscuous
Personal philosophies: Actions speak more than words.
Politics:
Spirituality:
Prejudices:
Greatest strength: Physical strength and combat ability.
Greatest weakness or flaw: Easily won over by offer of sweets.
How are they perceived by others: Probably rather crude.
Proudest accomplishment: Yet to come.
Other accomplishments:
Biggest regret:
Most embarrassing moment:
Personality quirks: Has an inside joke of her 'being a descendant of dragons'.
Would they like to change anything about themselves:
Short term or long term goals: To continue traveling, fighting, and smithing.
Obstacles: It gets lonely sometimes.
Likes or dislikes: Enjoys sex, drink, sweets, and casual conversation.
PAST HISTORY:
Hometown: (not sure on specifics. Just a small village.
Past relationships: None
First love: None
First sexual experience: A drunk night in company of good comrades. Doesn't regret.
Major childhood events: Constantly asked again and again by the non-Au Ra children of her home if she was a dragon. To the point she made it her little quirk and personal motivation.
Best memory: Her first blade.
Worst memory: The isolation of her childhood.
Saddest memory:
Quality of childhood: Average.
Educational experience/level: Normal.
Significant school experiences: None.
Special skills or training: Self trained fighter and smith.
Anything un-skilled, needs work:
Hobbies: Drinking and sex. Fighting and smithing.
Police record/criminal record: None
DAILY LIFE:
Morning routine: Clean, groom, bathe if available.
Afternoon routine: Training.
Evening routine: Continued training or, as permit able, the pub.
Sleep habits: Not picky.
Additional information:
BACKSTORY:
Uzali grew up in a small village. One of the only Au Ra she had little in common with other children her age. Most who had been uneducated on the matter thought she was a dragon, either taking awe or viewing her as a beast. After years of this she decided for it to be her goal. If she was to be thought of as a dragon, she would become as strong as one.
After coming of age she set out for Limsa Lominsa to learn the basics of armoring and smithing before taking her ax out for training. She made her income with small jobs, both extermination and crafting orders, and simply owned a room at the resident inn. Due to her mostly lonely childhood she didn't interact much with others, apart from the occasional job involving others of her interests, be they smiths or mercenaries. In these cases she may stick with them for a small time, perhaps share a drink.
While strong already, every day is a new day to train for her. You never knew what the next day might bring after all.
Using this detailed sheet i came across in the threads
THE BASICS:
Character name: Uzali Uyagir
Nickname:
Origin of Nickname:
Birthdate: 20th Sun of the 6th Astral Moon
Place of Birth: (not sure where i should say. She's an Au Ra Xaela)
Ethnicity: Au RA
Religion: Non-religious
Height: 6" 3'
Weight: Slim.
Body type: Fit. Toned but not overly muscular.
Eye color: Red
Glasses or Vision Enhancements:
Skin tone (pale, tan, olive, brown, etc): Dark blue
Face shape: (round, square, oval, chubby, heart-shaped):Â
Prominent features:
Tattoos or distinguishing marks: Scar on left eye.
Casting choice (what actor do they resemble?):
General health:
Disabilities, illnesses, or weaknesses: None.
Fashion and style (what do they wear, how do they wear it?): (havent been able to decide on an outfit.
Special jewelry: None.
Hair color: Blue
Hairstyle: Smooth and long.
Grooming: Brushed and washed regularly.
Additional information:
COMMUNICATION SKILLS:
Languages spoken: Common and native language.
Accent or dialect: No outstanding accent.
Vocabulary/reading level: Educated.
Voice tone: Mature.
Favorite phrases: "Call a pebble a boulder long enough, and it will believe."
Do they curse: Yes, freely.
Demeanor: Blunt and to the point, but caring and sociable.
Mannerisms: Usually very calm and mature.
Gestures:
Habitual behaviors (nail-biting, drumming fingers, hair fixing, etc.):
Posture: Strong, straight posture.
PROFESSIONAL INFO:
Current occupation: Traveler, Blacksmith/armorer.
Level of job satisfaction: High.
Years at current occupation:
Income:
Professional skills:
Combat skills: Years of honed endurance and physical strength.
PERSONAL RELATIONSHIPS:
Marital status: Single
Significant partner(s): None
How did they meet partner:
Nickname for partner:
Previous romantic partners:
Children: None
Relationship with children:
Step-children:
How does the character relate to:
Spouse:
Lover:
Past lovers/spouses:
Children:
Friends: Respectful and friendly.
Employer: Professional and to the point.
Underlings:
Minions:
Pets: Gentle and caring.
Strangers:
Opposite sex: Flirtatious.
Same sex:
Family members:
Competitors:
Authority:
Enemies: Threatening and aggressive
Additional information:
CHARACTER PERSONALITY AND PSYCHOLOGY:
What do they love: Bellows of the furnace, battle, romance.
What is their passion: Furthering her skills.
What do they hate: Sitting around doing nothing for long periods of time.
What would they die for: To leave her mark and ensure a better place.
What do they value: Reliability
Secret loves: Sweets.
Sexual behavior:Â promiscuous
Personal philosophies: Actions speak more than words.
Politics:
Spirituality:
Prejudices:
Greatest strength: Physical strength and combat ability.
Greatest weakness or flaw: Easily won over by offer of sweets.
How are they perceived by others: Probably rather crude.
Proudest accomplishment: Yet to come.
Other accomplishments:
Biggest regret:
Most embarrassing moment:
Personality quirks: Has an inside joke of her 'being a descendant of dragons'.
Would they like to change anything about themselves:
Short term or long term goals: To continue traveling, fighting, and smithing.
Obstacles: It gets lonely sometimes.
Likes or dislikes: Enjoys sex, drink, sweets, and casual conversation.
PAST HISTORY:
Hometown: (not sure on specifics. Just a small village.
Past relationships: None
First love: None
First sexual experience: A drunk night in company of good comrades. Doesn't regret.
Major childhood events: Constantly asked again and again by the non-Au Ra children of her home if she was a dragon. To the point she made it her little quirk and personal motivation.
Best memory: Her first blade.
Worst memory: The isolation of her childhood.
Saddest memory:
Quality of childhood: Average.
Educational experience/level: Normal.
Significant school experiences: None.
Special skills or training: Self trained fighter and smith.
Anything un-skilled, needs work:
Hobbies: Drinking and sex. Fighting and smithing.
Police record/criminal record: None
DAILY LIFE:
Morning routine: Clean, groom, bathe if available.
Afternoon routine: Training.
Evening routine: Continued training or, as permit able, the pub.
Sleep habits: Not picky.
Additional information:
BACKSTORY:
Uzali grew up in a small village. One of the only Au Ra she had little in common with other children her age. Most who had been uneducated on the matter thought she was a dragon, either taking awe or viewing her as a beast. After years of this she decided for it to be her goal. If she was to be thought of as a dragon, she would become as strong as one.
After coming of age she set out for Limsa Lominsa to learn the basics of armoring and smithing before taking her ax out for training. She made her income with small jobs, both extermination and crafting orders, and simply owned a room at the resident inn. Due to her mostly lonely childhood she didn't interact much with others, apart from the occasional job involving others of her interests, be they smiths or mercenaries. In these cases she may stick with them for a small time, perhaps share a drink.
While strong already, every day is a new day to train for her. You never knew what the next day might bring after all.