Thank you.
I'm also willing/open to any suggestions you guys might have to make this story a little better. I'd be lying if I said I had the first clue about anything I'm doing. D:
The fantasia thing I'm still iffy on (though while her Father is a good soldier, I would not put something like this in terms of being irresponsible past him), truthfully, but I honestly can't think of/don't know of any other reasons she'd have been a Miqo'te all this time and suddenly an Au Ri. I don't really want to go a typical route of "Oops I drank a thing, oh well guess I'm stuck now" Â (Nothing wrong with that, but I admit I like a little flair and junk.)
I'm also willing/open to any suggestions you guys might have to make this story a little better. I'd be lying if I said I had the first clue about anything I'm doing. D:
The fantasia thing I'm still iffy on (though while her Father is a good soldier, I would not put something like this in terms of being irresponsible past him), truthfully, but I honestly can't think of/don't know of any other reasons she'd have been a Miqo'te all this time and suddenly an Au Ri. I don't really want to go a typical route of "Oops I drank a thing, oh well guess I'm stuck now" Â (Nothing wrong with that, but I admit I like a little flair and junk.)
