Hello,
I was just wondering if this back story for my character would be acceptable?Or should I come up with a new one?
Any tips are welcomed.
https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages...ie_Rangris
Quick ideas now:
I was just wondering if this back story for my character would be acceptable?Or should I come up with a new one?
Any tips are welcomed.
https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages...ie_Rangris
Quick ideas now:
Ideas
Tam-Tara based ideas:
- Traveling Knowledge Broker gets an odd request for information by a young conjurer named Edda
- Knowledge Broker feels something is off, she hears from the villagers that Edda is in Tam-Tara and heads there to check out the situation.
- Shortly after she is greeted by Paiyo Reiyo and some adventurers leaving looking very shaken up.
- The traveling Knowledge Broker is very baffled by the use of the little information she gave that had made Tam-Tara become what it is now
- Traveling Knowledge Broker spends many hours investigating Tam-Tara
- Despite having all the information she needs after weeks of coming back to Tam-Tara she keeps returning wanting to know more becoming obsessed with Edda's work
Tam-Tara based ideas 2:
- Traveling cook regulars are Edda, Liavinne, Avere, and Paiyo are always making her laugh they all seem to butt heads often but they share a common goal which I really admire.
- Cooking for them becomes something very dear to me to see their daily antics.
- Avere and Edda are dating but Avere is not very nice to Edda.
- I confronted Edda telling her she deserved better and Edda just smiled at me with no response.
- I thought nothing of it at the time.
- I gave the group extra food and they went on their way to Tam-Tara.
- Cooking for adventurers later on I heard about a mishap at Tam-Tara.
- My heart quickly sunk and I rushed to the entrance of Tam-Tara.
- There I saw Paiyo a mess leaving with a group of adventurers.
- I entered Tam-Tara without any skills of combat hoping I be able to find Edda she was always the calm one of the group.
- Everything was dark.
- Torches suddenly lit as I walked by I heard a loud twisted laugh seeing Edda pale and with a cynical smile.
- I ran as fast as I could getting lost Tam-Tara spending my time running from Edda.
- Spending more time there made me see what truly was of Edda and it made me want to leave even more.
- I spent weeks running from her waiting for someone and having her twist my thoughts.
- I awaited for someone to come save me.
- Months soon went by and time faded away.
- I lived off of anything edible in my surroundings.
- A group of adventurers found me one day helping me escape Edda.
- My eyesight had change from being in the darkness for so long and my mind had also been broken.
The Void Ideas:- A Conjurer gets a request to help assist a group of adventurers who are getting rid of a demon named Buso who has taken over a nearby Mineshaft.
- Her duty is help assist the group while they defeat Buso.
- The battle is successful but last second everything goes wrong.
- The Void is very unhappy and drags the Conjurer to the Void.
- Conjurer becomes trapped in the void.
- Being tortured as entertainment, stealing her aether when needed but letting her stay alive for their enjoyment.
- She awakes in Eorzea unsure of what happened but with a burning sensation in her head that will not go away.
- She travels to the crowded streets of Ul'dah.
- Orbs of light flow everywhere and twisted faceless demons dance around feasting.
- The imprints in her mind and odd flash backs have seemed to effected her brain in a way that she is able to see the voidsent and who they are latched onto.
- But also making herself in danger because of the voidsent knowing that she has this ability to see them.
The Void Ideas 2:
- An honest farmers daughter from Limsa who has two sisters
- One sister is an archer
- The other is a blacksmith
- Unsure of what she wants she continues to live along side her father who hates his job, he wishing to one day be a rich merchant.
- Both of her sisters went off to travel leaving her and her father alone
- She loves her father but he complains a lot causing her to one day snap yelling at him
- He takes her yelling at him very serious and forbids her from going outside
- She thinks that he may be plotting something for him to get that wealth he wanted out of her
- Shortly after her sister the archer returns maddened and sick she has been over exposed to Aether from her travels.
- He hires a white mage to look into the archers health, she tells him that she has been over exposed and the only way to cure her is of voidsent blood
- The father fetches his daughter and drags her up to an area that most people do not dare go to.
- A voidsent appears and just stares at the man
- "If I give you my daughter, can I have some of your blood?"
- The voidsent seems interested and offers some of his blood for the human.
- The voidsent takes the hyur daughter back to the void where she spends many of her years.
- Her mind is blank she can not handle anymore of the void.
- Seeing her as a used doll the voidsent release her back to Limsa where the once world she loved so dearly she could no longer remember.
- A Conjurer gets a request to help assist a group of adventurers who are getting rid of a demon named Buso who has taken over a nearby Mineshaft.
