To build off of what Melkire said, I also don't see very many flaws. I'm not gonna really bother explaining why, because I think Melk does a good job of it, so I'm just gonna hop straight to the point. You want my brutal, honest advice?
Axe his combat/magical prowess. A lot of the times in real life, the highly skilled crafters and artisans are not very good at using the things they create. It's like the saying, "God only gives with one hand." I think all his skills outside of crafting and building should be subpar at best. Prodigy at something or not, it still would take a great deal of time to hone all of the crafts and skills. Having a natural talent for something doesn't negate the years of training needed to hone those skills. Where would he fit in the rest?
Also, wording. This one is more minor, but 'can manipulate others', I would just completely replace as manipulative and 'will try to weasel his way out of a fight and make others do the swinging for him.' This is speaking as the player of a character who is nigh impossible to swindle into a fight. I always feel it's better to make statements like that more open ended so it doesn't come off too OP, I guess? (It's late, words are hard right now.)
Axe his combat/magical prowess. A lot of the times in real life, the highly skilled crafters and artisans are not very good at using the things they create. It's like the saying, "God only gives with one hand." I think all his skills outside of crafting and building should be subpar at best. Prodigy at something or not, it still would take a great deal of time to hone all of the crafts and skills. Having a natural talent for something doesn't negate the years of training needed to hone those skills. Where would he fit in the rest?
Also, wording. This one is more minor, but 'can manipulate others', I would just completely replace as manipulative and 'will try to weasel his way out of a fight and make others do the swinging for him.' This is speaking as the player of a character who is nigh impossible to swindle into a fight. I always feel it's better to make statements like that more open ended so it doesn't come off too OP, I guess? (It's late, words are hard right now.)
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[5]<Kayllen Stormbringer> I'm kinda wondering if Rhalgr and Halone's relationship
is like strong independent warrior queen and her tourettes-ridden father with a drinking problem.
