Definately not bad.
However, some people would most likely point out that it couldn't have been a White Mage that aided him, because of the White Mage lore. Apparently, only Padjali and The Hero of Light are able to be real White Mages, as everyone else attempting to be so turns insane. But that can easily be corrected by saying a Conjurer came for his aid. ^^
However, some people would most likely point out that it couldn't have been a White Mage that aided him, because of the White Mage lore. Apparently, only Padjali and The Hero of Light are able to be real White Mages, as everyone else attempting to be so turns insane. But that can easily be corrected by saying a Conjurer came for his aid. ^^