Normally id call it the cliche lone survivor emo that's been overused. (IM NOT DONE YET)
BUT! (SEE I WASN'T GOING TO PICK ON YOU)
Given the Xaela lore your story is a lot more believable then some of the stuff I've heard. I like it.
Only issue is the void part. I don't think dark magic is synonymous with void magic as technically anything that doesn't help something can be dubbed /dark/ depending on the people.Â
Other than that it sounds perfectly fine.
BUT! (SEE I WASN'T GOING TO PICK ON YOU)
Given the Xaela lore your story is a lot more believable then some of the stuff I've heard. I like it.
Only issue is the void part. I don't think dark magic is synonymous with void magic as technically anything that doesn't help something can be dubbed /dark/ depending on the people.Â
Other than that it sounds perfectly fine.
Kevin Gates - Told Me