(12-23-2015, 07:00 AM)Suna Rokuyari Wrote:(12-22-2015, 10:33 AM)SicketySix Wrote:(12-22-2015, 06:56 AM)Suna Rokuyari Wrote:(12-22-2015, 05:03 AM)SicketySix Wrote: Are you open to a bit of critiquing advice?Ah! I guess I should have been more clear! I am sorry! No offense taken! I kinda thought they where an oddity living in hiding for the most part. (Except for Papa Rokuyari's employer they kinda stayed in the background.) When she was performing she was just thought to have worn a costume of sorts. Suna actually hasn't seen any of her kind until recently, which was a happy surprise to her.
If so......
It's my understanding that the Auri have only just arrived/have been discovered recently. So that being said, the game then goes into saying that the Kha tribe, has actively sought out other non Auri people. So it's kind of a grey area, but you may have a harder time convincing most people that a Au Ra family has been living in Ul'dah for that long, much less employed at a place as prominent as the Golden Saucer.
Just providing a bit of lore friendly advice is all!
Hope you have fun with the game!
I will actually go and amend this in her profile. Thank you!
Ahh yes that makes sense. And infact that's who a lot of people went about introducing their "Oh I was An Au Ra the whole time" stories. Which thanks to the way SE just randomly threw them into the game world, it was really the only way to incorporate them in.
You should have no problem with the way you've written your backstory.
 I thank you so much for your critique It helps me become a better role player!
May I ask you advice sometime as well?
Sure, but I may not be able to help as well as many others here on the forum. I have to seek council myself as well but will be more than happy to help with what I do know, or at least point you to some topics where it's been discussed.
