(09-08-2016, 05:02 PM)Max Wrote: Np! I'd like to take back something I said though, saying that I'd completely get rid of the voidsent plotline.Yeah that makes more sense. I think I'll keep this plotline and raze the rest. Start from the ground up and actually do some research first haha. Thanks again for helping.
I think the void-touched thing can still be done, just that the execution would require some polishing.
IIRC, A succubus will inject her soul into the deceased body of a woman. So a suggestion/example would be that Luna was near death during the ritual -- fooling the cultists into believing that she was dead, only to unknowingly insert Lu'Ventras' soul into the truly-alive Raen, which caused the body-sharing conundrum.
I'd also have Lu'Ventras' influence become a more apparent staple in Luna's mind and personality. So that the presence of the succubus is felt rather obviously and oft negatively, instead of a thing where it's like "O, that's just my voidsent personality quirk!"
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RE: Void touched Raen (New backstory) - by ZodiacRaen - 09-08-2016, 05:36 PM
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RE: Void touched Raen (New backstory) - by ZodiacRaen - 09-08-2016, 04:38 PM
RE: Void touched Raen (New backstory) - by Max - 09-08-2016, 05:02 PM
RE: Void touched Raen (New backstory) - by ZodiacRaen - 09-08-2016, 05:35 PM
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