
(07-13-2013, 12:03 AM)ManaaniWanderer Wrote: Sounds very good. Your tempting me to redo Xha'li's in first person during the break between phase 3 and 4 as well.Thank you for the feedback. I was starting to worry that it was terrible or something. I like writing in first person and I figured him telling the tale would be really interesting, almost like an interview or something of that nature.