(07-25-2013, 05:34 AM)Kyatai Wrote: I thought it was very good...
... despite my disappointment that you won't be on my server
Very well thought out and logical. Other than a few typos (which you admitted would be there in this rough draft), great job
I know, I know D:
I wasn't aware that Balmung and Gilgamesh were going to be the "unofficial" RP servers when I picked Leviathan during the beta (doing so because it was my server on FFXI). As much as I'd enjoy a switch, I'm reluctant to abandon the awesome people I met on Levi, especially after we all made a big deal about find each other again when Phase 4 starts.
If I'm able to get a server-transfer though, I should be able to transfer my 1.0 character over to Balmung. But even then, I'm not sure how active I would be on that character. So... we'll see ;x
(07-25-2013, 09:55 AM)Zarek Wrote: Agreed! This is a really nicely done character concept. I'm no lore expert by any means so you may want to get one of them to skim it to verify but just from a character building perspective I'd say it's well done.
I'm certainly hoping that one comes around ^^;
I was really reluctant to specifically mention where some places in the story were located out of fear of stepping on the lore's toes a bit--though I suppose leaving them vague allows for some flexibility once the character gets thrown into the chaotic mesh of other roleplayers. I tried my best to keep up with the lore and do some research where necessary, but it'd be reassuring to have someone double-check that for me, especially considering that Dalamud and the Echo played a pivotal role in M'kharis's plot.
Also, thank you both for checking things out for me. I appreciate it ^^
