I feel pretty good about what I have with Tam, but I'd be happy to receive some critique.
Name: Narantsetseg "Tamron" Dalamiq
Age: 24
Bio:
As Dalamud began its slow fall, this smith ventured forth from her tribe's river settlement to see for herself the fate of the once-holy moon. She arrived in Eorzea just before the Calamity. That dreaded day awoke within her a fascination with the calamitous dragon and the summoning of primals, leading her to study arcanum. She now seeks to learn and understand the old art of summoning.
Passion can't fill a stomach, and she received little blacksmith work. She stays at inns or in alleys, and more often than not must fish up meals for herself.
She is blunt but means well, and gets flustered if she harms anyone physically or emotionally. An unpleasant journey to Eorzea made her wary, but she has not completely closed herself off from others. She goes by "Tamron" rather than "Narantsetseg" largely because she finds the latter unwieldly for Eorzeans. She uses improper contractions and slang frequently. Saltwater makes her scales itch.
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Essentially, she's an arcanist with lofty goals she has no current means of achieving. I want her to have the potential for some summoning despite her lack of the Echo, which is why she arrived in Eorzea in time to be awash in Bahamut's aether. Bahamut and Dalamud as a whole hold more importance to her as a character than the other primals, so I feel like bringing them in would largely be a distraction. While she wants to summon, whether she'll be able to at all or not is yet undetermined. Her chronic lack of money is, meanwhile, a nice potential lead-in for RP outside of her main goals.
Thoughts? c:
Name: Narantsetseg "Tamron" Dalamiq
Age: 24
Bio:
As Dalamud began its slow fall, this smith ventured forth from her tribe's river settlement to see for herself the fate of the once-holy moon. She arrived in Eorzea just before the Calamity. That dreaded day awoke within her a fascination with the calamitous dragon and the summoning of primals, leading her to study arcanum. She now seeks to learn and understand the old art of summoning.
Passion can't fill a stomach, and she received little blacksmith work. She stays at inns or in alleys, and more often than not must fish up meals for herself.
She is blunt but means well, and gets flustered if she harms anyone physically or emotionally. An unpleasant journey to Eorzea made her wary, but she has not completely closed herself off from others. She goes by "Tamron" rather than "Narantsetseg" largely because she finds the latter unwieldly for Eorzeans. She uses improper contractions and slang frequently. Saltwater makes her scales itch.
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Essentially, she's an arcanist with lofty goals she has no current means of achieving. I want her to have the potential for some summoning despite her lack of the Echo, which is why she arrived in Eorzea in time to be awash in Bahamut's aether. Bahamut and Dalamud as a whole hold more importance to her as a character than the other primals, so I feel like bringing them in would largely be a distraction. While she wants to summon, whether she'll be able to at all or not is yet undetermined. Her chronic lack of money is, meanwhile, a nice potential lead-in for RP outside of her main goals.
Thoughts? c:
