(01-20-2015, 02:51 PM)Kamome Wrote: I am new to FFXIV as of the first weekend in January, and new to Balmung as of this morning! I recently finished putting some meat on the bones of my two main characters' wiki pages:
Rosalind, Eccentric Ul'dahn Bookseller: https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages...d_Westwind
Kamome, Mopey Doman Smuggler:Â https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages...e_Greywing
I am looking for some lore-inclined readers to do a quick scan of my dates and character histories and let me know if they see any glaring errors. I am still very, very new to Hydaelyn's lore because I'm still a new player in the game's lower level ranges.
A warning: they are pretty wordy and full of run-on sentences at the moment. If you read them and catch any errors, I would be eternally grateful (especially because they are so rambly right now...) Please send me a PM if you have any feedback or corrections! My English is not as good as it should be and I would love edit suggestions if they occur to you, too. Maybe it's crazy of me to think one of you would enjoy correcting my English, but I find editing fun, myself.
I can't wait to see all of you in Hydaelyn tonight!
