(07-31-2013, 08:34 PM)shinymogwai Wrote:(07-31-2013, 08:29 PM)Callipygian Wrote: Looks like you have a good start to a story going there. Â It's very sad that her sisters died. Â
Thanks! I used your post on possible Miqo'te mating structures to figure out her family.
And yes, though this character is faring better than her previous incarnations. At least she has a family in this verse!
I'm... Not very nice to my characters.
Being orphaned or having a single parent, or having lost loved ones is pretty common in literature, character creation, and backstories. It gives the reader and/or viewer a chance to immediately symphathise with the character.
Sounds like you have a well-rounded Keeper here, and a lot to work with in terms of keeping the RP going strong. Best of luck to you!