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RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) |
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04-28-2014, 05:01 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-28-2014, 06:17 PM by Edgar.)
I...I honestly did not think it possible to butcher this much lore in one post.

Edit: Every flaw I found.

1. There are no Miqo'te in Ivalice.
2. Fran and Balthier are not Miqo'te, so it is impossible for their child to be Half-Miqo'te.
3. Cos Mo defies Miqo'te naming conventions, but I find that argument to be irrelevant because of points 1 and 2.
4. Teleport in a Healing Tome.
5. Carbuncle is summoned through the use of an Emerald or Topaz mixed with a spell drawing upon the Sacred Geometry of Arcanum. Not through magical tears.
6. Is it an Emerald or Topaz Carbuncle? You do not specify.
7. Is his name Cos Mo, CosMo, or Cosmo? Pick one.
8. You forgot to elaborate on the "gay" aspect of this character.
9. Teleporting to Eorzea will not help you in any way, shape, or form in your quest to be, and I quote, "LIKE EVERYONE ELSE." In fact, it'll make things even worse.
10. The spell "Teleport" does not involve the use of a magic feather. That only happens when you use a tuft of Phoenix Down.
11. The grammar. 
12. The spelling. 
13. The sudden use of narrative-defying emotes. 
14. Do male Viera even exist?!
15. If you had any knowledge of how Tome based magic works, you would know destroying a Tome basically prevents you from using its magic. Therefore, it would be impossible for your character to activate a Teleport spell from the Tome, let alone with magical tears.
16. Limsa is a city. Not a town.
17. The world is called Hydaelyn. The landmass you are on is called Eorzea.

I hope this post helps you improve your story in some way.

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Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Violo - 04-28-2014, 11:05 AM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by FreelanceWizard - 04-28-2014, 03:35 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Edgar - 04-28-2014, 05:01 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by allgivenover - 04-29-2014, 10:01 AM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Edgar - 04-29-2014, 02:57 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Aysun - 04-28-2014, 06:57 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Hyakki - 04-28-2014, 08:09 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Avalt Laguz - 04-29-2014, 07:03 AM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Melkire - 04-28-2014, 09:30 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Edgar - 04-28-2014, 11:37 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Parth Makeo - 04-28-2014, 11:56 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Arkghyom - 04-28-2014, 10:21 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Violo - 04-28-2014, 11:08 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Edgar - 04-29-2014, 12:08 AM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Twinflame - 04-28-2014, 11:19 PM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by ArmachiA - 04-29-2014, 04:12 AM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Melodia - 04-29-2014, 07:10 AM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Kage - 04-29-2014, 08:59 AM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by C'kayah Polaali - 04-29-2014, 10:30 AM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Yangh - 04-29-2014, 11:27 AM
RE: Ff Xii -New Beginning (Gay RP) - by Hyakki - 04-29-2014, 12:19 PM

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