Hello, I created the first draft of my characters background. The idea was that he is unexpectedly laid back for a Miqo'te. Due to his reluctance to share too much information about his history before coming to Eorzea or himself, he is very calculating and won't think an action through at least 3 times. Despite that, he acts Eerily upbeat and seems to be easy to get along with.
I am not sure if its too long or complicated, or if it even fits within the general tone of FF14. I would really appreciate getting some feedback on it, good or bad. Some content of this background story is quite dark, so I will spoiler tag the story.
Anyway, thank you very much for reading my post!