Lore Check and Character Critique

[Sig]

After role-playing Sig for a while, I've hit a pretty consistent grove regarding his general background, demeanor, and disposition.  In sum, he's a complicated, difficult character to role-play, considering he is extremely self-serving, manipulative, and emotionally unstable.  It's one of my first attempts role-playing a character that does not fall into a fairly predictable trope or norms. 

 

I'm still immersing myself in basic lore, but only strive for relative compliance, seeing as Sig cares extremely little for grandiose conflicts or epic things.  However, I'm concerned some facets of his background may breach lore or appear disjointed.  

 

Anyhow, it's been a while since I've engaged in such high-quality and fun role-play.  Balmung is a great RP community.  I welcome any lore critiques or constructive criticism.   Stylistically, I feel like my prose could come off as robotic at times, considering my professional writing background. Feel free to rip into anything.

 

Wiki link: Sigurd Sundsteigen