I wrote a sort story

[Leomoon]

Hello everyone. 

 

I am currently taking a break from XIV due to just worn out and as well a few games I am wanting to play are coming out in just a few weeks so in the mean time I decided to sit down and do some things I have been wanting to do and that's drawing and writing.

 

I got the writing down here and I will be adding onto more of it later this week.

 

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11456138/1/Tana-s-dream-journal

 

Please tell me what you all think of this story.

[Aya]

Nice Tana!  Its definitely good no write!  I suggest another pass or two at proofreading and carrying on

[Leomoon]

Nice Tana!  Its definitely good no write!  I suggest another pass or two at proofreading and carrying on

I plan on keeping it going but I don't know esacly what I want to do for the Eye though I do know what it will do to her in the end game but no plan on where its from just yet.