Here it is! finally finished! Profile for Vincent Sarkoza

[Halstein Mercer]

https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages/Vincent_Sarkoza

 

let me know what y'all think ^.^

[Kai Motokawa]

I just want to say, Oh my god. Can you write. A LOT! I can tell a lot of time has went into this character, and omg he's cute too! I love the idea of this "Traveling Cook, Wildlife Cataloger" and then just completely left field. BOOM! "Assassin for Hire." (that was a good BOOM! btw, It's like. "Oh that's a cute kitty." "Really? She's white with black spots.. but the best part is.. SHE CAN FLY ACROSS THE ROOM! BOOM!")

 

I like the fact that he smells like Tea. That is beautiful. I like what you wrote! (Even though I'm still reading through it as I'm typing this!!) I'd say as-long as you plan to not go into a bar and say "Hey, I'm an Chef by day and assassin by night!" Then you're good to go! I'd love to see you RP him sometime! I like the Aliases you gave him as well. He definitely looks like fun and I hope he is fun for you to RP as! Because the bottom line is, As long as you're having fun Roleplaying that, that's what matters the most! 'least thats what I always go by, GUT FEELINGS!

 

 

(only complaint is my inability to read walls of text, I'm going crossed eye! nonetheless, it's a very well thought-out profile. Good luck with RP! ♥)

[Halstein Mercer]

Hey glad you like it  already I've thought about a few more things I can add to give Vincent some more depth. I've also noticed a few errors here and there that I will straighten out shortly. Nothing else to do while I'm on a 9hour I layover  

 

Also I'll try not to make the wall of text so hard to read, thanks for the suggestion ^.^ 

 

Also, love your profile layout!

[Halstein Mercer]

Hey glad you like it  already I've thought about a few more things I can add to give Vincent some more depth. I've also noticed a few errors here and there that I will straighten out shortly. Nothing else to do while I'm on a 9hour I layover  

 

Also I'll try not to make the wall of text so hard to read, thanks for the suggestion ^.^ 

 

And love your profile layout!

[Halstein Mercer]

updated! (8/25) fixed typos and spacing. added a few more details in the personality section to give him more depth. will continue to be a wip