Did I Do Okay?

[Theodore Castagnier]

Sooooo way earlier this morning(U.S EST time), I did my character's wiki page. I feel satisfied with it, yet at the same time, always have this itching nag in the back of my head requiring opinions of other people, as I tend to be critical about my own work like that. So, if you guys don't mind too terribly, I'd love you all forever if you could take a gander at said wiki page and give me some critique. What do you like about it? What do you think could be improved? Do you have ideas/suggestions for the route I'm going with their story? I am an open book, and very flexible, so please, do not hold back on the constructive criticism. Hope to hear from someone soon. :cactuar:

 

Wiki link is in my sig down below