First time doing RP-ing

[Dark Dranzer]

Hey guys

 

Looking for a bit of help with creating my character's backstory, I got notes down on Google Docs and would like to refine them a bit before I'm confident enough to put it on the wiki or on the carrd, it's very disorganised so I mainly need help in organising them into a coherent origin.  Any advice and help would be appreciated:

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zbn2XDVaTODPmSjepNT3vTzCTUmstlbwqmOdUne1dbg/edit?usp=sharing

Edited December 6, 2021 by Dark Dranzer