Background story

[Ghitx]

I will need the help of those who know more about the seekers and their territorial boundaries.  This is what I have or want to have as a background story. I don't know if it possible so please let me know if there is something wrong or if I need to change something  thank you:cactuar: 

 

 ( this is my idea in case I cant find a form family or group of family at this post)

 

My character's is a second son of the family of 6 children ( the first 4 children are female, and then the mother was pregnant with twins (males twins). so the first male was name Nheu'a Prya and the second Nheu'to Prya (my character)  The mother  felt bless  for having two males twins.  Growing up was ok and easy, both sons were happy and honored to have their mother's name.  But when they were  a bit older a tribe of Seekers had a dispute with our small community of families ( mostly 3 families) regarding territorial boundaries. they decided to make a small duel  to end the dispute,   one of the nunh of their tribe decided to be the chosen one for the duel.  Being my brother the oldest male capable to fight  he volunteer, the duel was not to the death and both sides decided to honor the Bet, if the seekers lose they will leave the keepers territory alone and also given them  some neutral space between territories for mutual hunting, if  the keepers lose they had to move to another territory or chose to live under the Nunhs  authority, but of course they would prefer to move out.  To make the story short the keepers won the  duel, but the seekers  nunh hurt its pride, and in two days  the seekers broke their word and attacked the small families, killing my brother and  taking what they could. I survived and move on ( I will give more details if necessary.

 

 

 

 What do you think? I also don't know if  keepers and seekers  can have this kind  of disagreement