NariMoon

Thanks the awesome feedback. You've given me some things to think about. She did grow up in a tribe where the women went hunting with bows and arrows, which is where she gets that skill from. Maybe, I might rethink it a bit more.

So I have the following backstory for my Xaela, Nari Moon. Is it too much? Would you say it fits within the lore boundaries? "Born to a tribe where the women were the hunters with bows and arrows, and the men were the homemakers. Nari’s childhood was full of carving bows out of trees, and hunting down animals for the tribe to eat with her mother. However, when she was 14 her mother died. She never really got on with her father, it always seemed like he hated her, only every spoke two words to her everyday. Simply “Stay Safe,” but she never knew if that was for her or her mother. He took the death of this wife very badly, and ended up telling Nari a hidden secret. He wasn’t her father. About 9 months before Nari was born, her mother was out hunting on a 3 day quest. Where she met a Raen, who was travelling for to gather knowledge. They had a quick whirlwind of a romance, and then went separate ways. Apparently, her mother didn’t tell him this until Nari was nearly born with fear that she may be born with the white scales of her birth-father. The man who raised her also told Nari that he had always resented her, as she was a gift from another man, that he couldn’t give the woman he loved. He raised her despite that because he loved Nari’s mother too much to leave her, and he always wanted to raise a girl. A few days later, he grabbed Nari and packed a small sack of essentials and left the tribe. Along the way, he sold her to a rich family as a hunter and took off with the money, and promised that he will be back when he has grieved for his wife. But he never did come back. The family that she was sold to were not what she thought. They were in fact a family like a mafia. They owned a brothel and thought women were only good for serving men with food, wine and sex. They bought Nari as their “exotic” girl. During her time at the brothel she became the top girl. She worked the brothel, seeing 3-7 men a shift, at night, and was a maid during the day. She was only given 3 hours for sleep a day. One day, when she was about 21, she met a tall man, with black hair and glistening blue eyes. He started to visit her every night. Not just for sex, but for conversation. He taught her how to read and write. And even how to use the sword. They were in love. When she was 24, she started to sneak out of the brothel to see him. The family that owned her found out. They threatened to kill her if she didn’t stop seeing him. But she knew this was an empty threat. They needed her alive, she made them a fortune every night. After a while, she stopped going to the brothel completely and was planning on running away with the man she loved. But she needed money, and was stealing little bits of cash when she was the maid during the day. However, this didn’t go down well. She was held back by two of his men, while her boss and about 15 others went after her lover. Nari's mind started to fade, and her eyes changed colour. Something changed within her, she had snapped. Grabbing the knife from one man's boot, she stabbed the other. And when the other one retaliated, she kicked him in the groin. She ran. Running towards the barn, she grabbed the closest mount, which just happened to be her master's most prised possession, a white winged horse. It was also her favourite. And took off. Grabbing a bow and a bag of arrows she had stashed in the barn on the way. She had caught up with the mob, but she was too late. About 300 yards in front of her was the lifeless body of her lover. In anger, she grabbed an arrow from her back and aimed the bow at her former boss. It hit him right in the heart. He died. The rest of the men started running towards her, she grabbed several more arrows, aimed and fired. Several fell to the ground. She galloped towards her lover, and managed to get him over the steed's back and get on herself before the rest of the men caught up. She ran away. Her eyes changed back to the pink they once were, and her mind cleared. She couldn't remember what just happened, and was a little confused as to why she was on the back of the horse, clinging on to the man she loved. She cried. Within the next month, she buried her life partner in the spot they agreed to meet. And hid out in the woods. She did attempt to go back to the city in which she came, but there were wanted posters plastered to every wall with her face and name on them. She left. This was all 3 years ago. She was able to track down the man that brought her up, and he gave a name of her birth father and a possible location on where to find him. She started to track down her real father to Ul'dah. Making money by any means along the way. You name it, she's done it. She discovered she was particularly good at gathering rare items. This is where we see her today. Finally made it to Ul'dah after going through the Azim Steppe and Dorma. Staying a pub and library working for a newspaper. While gathering and hunting for a bit of side money." Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance.

hoping not in a bad way? maybe she's quite the traveller? or world explorer? btw if you would like another friend feel free to add me on Mateus! =D I'm hoping not in a bad way.. She does tend to get lost, being new to the area. So it could be where she was wandering aimlessly into a wall or something. Thanks, and you too if you see me first hit me with a friend request, but gently please, I tend to bruise easily.

Starting to think that Nari gets around a bit...

[align=center]BIG NEWS!![/align] [align=center]I've moved to Mateus![/align]

Entry 1 Bedding a man a night just to make money is such a waste of a talent. That was what I was doing before one of the guys asked me to join him on a hunt. I was intrigued so I went along with him. It was a hunt for some mythical creature that never turned up, and it ended up being a trap with me in as the creature being hunted by about 10 men. The winner could do what they wanted with me, apparently. But that was their plan. My plan was to seduce one, and kill them all. And it worked. That was a few years ago. Since then, I have more notches in my bow then I do on my bed. Now although I enjoy the thrill of the kill, and the blood splatter in my hair (It's a pain in the ass to clean), you can't beat a simple task of gathering a ton of iron or silver for a client that brings a smile to their face. If you want a job done, no matter how small, it's a job for me. But getting work in this city is tough, my old town I had quite the reputation before I was hired to kill a gang boss by a rival lot and caused an all out war, so I have to flee with my life. But here, I have to start from scratch. I have discovered that there are a lot of rich folk who like to flaunt what they have. It's easier to take if it's on their fingers. Easier to melt down and sell to the poorer lot. I suppose the reason I started this journal is so that I can look back and see where it all started when I live in a mansion on top of a hill, and I have a million servants, and all the rich guys serve the poor ones. It's a wish that is never going to happen. (OOC - I will probably continue this on Tumblr or something, but we will see)

I'm relatively new to the whole RP thing on FFXIV, but I'm not new to the game. I'm looking for RP friends who I can RP along side with and develop my characters story as well as other RPs. At the moment my character has just moved into a new office for her new business. An odd-jobber with a thirst for blood. Known as Nari Moon in game.

I. Basic Info Characters:Nari Moon Primary character:Nari Moon Linkshells:TBA Primary RP linkshell:TBA [*][*][*][*] II. RP Style Amount of RP (light, medium, heavy): I prefer a heavy RP, but with time and amount of time I spend online, I would have to be more light/medium Views on RP combat and injuries: I'm all up for a bit of combat and violence and whatnot. I prefer it to be randomised with a number generator about damage and such, but realistic involved. So someone might be stronger in one thing, but weaker in something else. If my character is injured, it will be incorporated into her character profile until healed. Views on IC romance: All for it, but not for my character. She has a partner, who is locked up in a far off land and has the power of speed. He's called Barry Allen. Views on non-romantic RP (family ties, etc): Love family ties, and hard-boiled friendships. I would love to incorporate Nari in a RP with all of that. Views on lore: Loose but Strict. Views on chat functions (/say, /linkshell, etc): I prefer something with /emote but whatever really. [*][*][*][*][*][*] III. Other Info Country:UK Timezone:BST Contact info:On here, or @Nari#6033 on discord. [*][*][*] [align=center][glow=blue]~Special announcements can be found in the posts below~[/glow][/align]

Hello! My name is Nari! Let's get the basics out of the way. I'm a mother, a writer, and a wife and in my mid-*cough*late-twenties. This is the first MMORPG I've played, and I've been playing for the past 3.5 years. It was also my first FF game. I have a little bit of experience with RP with a friend of mine over the years. And I've done a few on Gaiaonline when I was younger. But with my RL commitments, I've hardly had the time to RP at all. I found out about the forums a while ago when I transferred to Balmung, but then I changed back to Cerberus because I was missing my friends, and nobody was online when I was. But now I have jumped ship again to Omega. And at first I didn't like it, but now I love it. I have made a bunch of new friends. But I would like to dabble in a bit of RP. I'm looking for something that I can work around my real life, as I only get to play an hour or two here and there, and it's usually at 5am GMT. I would love to get really involved in a heavy RP, but realistically it will be light/medium. Anyways! HI!:lol: