Hello! So I made a backstory for my first RP character and I was hoping someone might be kind enough to take a look and give some insight or critiques into the backstory. If something is off, lore or other wise, it's too long, too short, not enough or too much of X, Y, Z here or there. Whatever comes to mind. Thank you in advance for your time and thoughts! My character card is here https://fjoraboesson.carrd.co/.