Yogo Romlo

It was really fun meeting all of yall. I hope to do it again soon. ^^

This is more of a question of how lore breaky my story for my character, or my character in general, is and if so, what I should change. First I guess is the general kind of stuff about my character: Race: Xaela Au Ra Gender: Male Birth name: Yeke Ura Name: Yogo Romlo Age: 21 Class:Machinist The origin story is that he lived peacefully until he was 10, was taken by Garlean scouts while helping his father strip ore from the mountain. Put into a workshop due to his basic understanding of ores and forging weapons. After 8 years here joined the empire's army as an engineer, working on Magitek Armour and Vanguards.First posted as a traveling engineer, going to where he was need the most then was permanently posted to Castrum Occidens, defected and changed his name after 3 years, due to exhaustion of supplies, an eventual combat position, and poor treatment weapons and machinery. And now I guess character specifics, chose the name last name Romlo after his nick name for his favorite Vanguard. A tinkerer that loves to create weapons and traps. Has many mamets and pets, including a combat mamet of his own design and a young bomb that he nurtured back to health. That's about all I can think about. Opinions and comments are welcome!