Nevermoar

To be fair, "The Syndicate", at least in my mind, does not conjure up images of a legitimate ruling body. Anyway, have swapped them out for the Alacran now that my head has been removed from my ass, and thank you for pointing that out to me. Any other critiques of the character herself?

Danke for pointing that out. Forgot that despite their sinister name they're not actually a crime ring. Changed it to refer to the shadier side of the Monetarists' dealings.

Good evening everyone. Fairly new player to FFXIV, though I've been RPing for most of my life. I was hoping that some of you might be willing to look over my first draft of my character's wiki and give your opinions and critiques. Also, I have a couple of random floating s showing up in text at one point that I can't seem to hunt down, and would love assistance in fixing it. Thank you. Ochuchu Ochu's Wiki Page