[Feedback] AG Character Wiki 1.0

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After a few weeks hammering a little at a time, Ancel's initial character page is finally done.

 

Comments:

• Main thrust was to illustrate background and motivation, where he comes from and why he lives as he does.
  
• Intentionally omitted references to Main Scenario and attempted to flesh out other adventuring experiences.
  
• Slight fiddling with terminology regarding game verbiage while trying to avoid being too worldbuildy.
  

 

Concerns:

• Observation of canon or misattribution of lore is to be avoided.
  
• There's possible redundancy within the narrative, and/or too many repeated references.
  
• The style of prose was meant to be slightly floral in places. Might be inappropriate for a wiki.
  
• Format is a reworked hybrid of a few templates, but may not flow as well as it could.
  

 

If you'd care to read or comment, please feel free. Thanks as always.