Connected by a Cable (Early Read)

[Parth Makeo]

so i've been writing up a story inspired by some Guildmates remark about "Imagine what our characters are thinking about when we make them do stupid shit?"

 

The premise is simple enough. A story based around the interaction of a player and the character in question. 'What if the characters we made had their own judgement on top of us controlling them? Like there is a 'Virtual' struggle and they had to communicate or compromise on things? It's just a start and before i finish the last touches, I invite the forum posters to read this chapter before it is finished up. 

 

It is in the stages of rewriting/adding/proofreading so don't expect it all to remain in there. Thank you and enjoy. Comments are appreciated too.

 

http://sta.sh/0ls9jwvoctp