Need some input on my first character.

[Kragwulf]

I've been putting off actually making a character until I learned the ins-and-outs of FFXIV RP. I finally felt like I was "Good enough" this morning and threw this together. I'm really happy with it, but I want some extra eyes to look over it to make sure there's no glaring mistakes and to see if there's anywhere I could make some improvements.

 

I was going for the "Big brooding scary man is actually a really smart and kind guy" trope. 

 

https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages/Kragwulf

Edited November 1, 2021 by Kragwulf

[Faye]

Everything looks fine to me, good start and very well written!

[Erah'sae]

Looks pretty good.  I'll keep an eye out for you, sounds like a decent character.

 

About the only thing I'd suggest adding is maybe some suggested hooks for folks to start interacting wiht you on?