Nira's Writings...

[Nira Muzyka]

Please leave all feedback and criticisms here, constructive or otherwise... Just so people don't have to actually read it while trying to read the stories

 

FLAME ON!

[Ghunzyr]

I love it, great story! Your description of the fight seen came of fairly smooth, which is saying a lot. Most people, in my opinion, can't write action scenes well.

 

The only issues I could see offhand were a few minor grammatical errors, and I don't really care about those as I make them all the time myself so can't truely hold them over anyone else's head.

[Nira Muzyka]

I love it' date=' great story! Your description of the fight seen came of fairly smooth, which is saying a lot. Most people, in my opinion, can't write action scenes well.[/quote']

Thank you, that was probably the section of the story that took the longest to fit together in a way that actually flowed.

 

The only issues I could see offhand were a few minor grammatical errors' date=' and I don't really care about those as I make them all the time myself so can't truely hold them over anyone else's head.[/quote']

Heh, that's why I'm going to try to find an editor at some point if I do keep on writing, it's their job to catch those things!!