Asking for advices on character profile!

[Vorelie]

So, after trying out different ideas and experiencing RP a little bit, I tried my hand at actually creating a profile for my first character.

 

Is it... too long? short? Anything crucial that I am missing? Anything that I should look to add?

Input for either the story/character itself or the layout of carrd are both welcome! It is also my first time using it.

I wanted to make sure it looked at least okay before posting it to look for rp partners, etc.

 

First time is always hard... although I am certainly enjoying it.

 

Here it is:

 

http://zsihna.carrd.co/

 

 

Also - happy new year, everyone!

[Faye]

Happy New Year!  Thanks for stopping by Happy Hour the other day! The carrd looks fine both layout and content wise. As for the length it's more of a personal preference, but I think Z'sihna's has enough useful info without being too overly long.

[Vorelie]

Thank you Faye for taking a look at it! It was a pleasure to stop by and meet people.

Z'sihna may have been a little overwhelmed at the start of that Happy Hour, but she certainly enjoyed her time (and a tad bit too much drink) there.