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THIS POST IS ALL OOC STUFF!

 

The following is what I had as a sort of "rough draft" back when I first started on this story path for Gogon. A lot of things changed, as you'll see. Gogon was more... openly arrogant, more melodramatic and dismissive. And a lot less paranoid and off-kilter than he ended up. He recognizes his brother and doesn't seem to care at all about him, which really didn't fit with the development of their relationship in their youth. It definitely hits the "corrupted WoL" angle I was originally going for a bit better, though, I think. Even considering the cheesy villanous line I included.

 

There are some other minor differences as well. Gogon had his Fairy out - which still had the "default" name of Lily instead of Ezra. Chachan still had his mispronunciation and slang thing going strong here, though. Even if he didn't have the cutesy nickname for his older brother.

 

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