Wiki help

[Taedrinnar]

Hey guys,

 

 I've done some MAJOR editing to my own Wiki page, and I think it looks rather nice.

 

However, i'm really bad with grammar, and words that have six different spellings and such. I could use the keen eye of an editor, or just 300 bored people looking for something to read. Please feel free to glance through it and post any errors here, or PM me.

 

Thank you!

 

https://wiki.ffxiv-roleplayers.com/pages/Taedrinnar_Ashmorrow

[Warren Castille]

I gave it the lazy once-over but it looks mostly clean to me. I changed one piece of punctuation and cleaned some spelling up, but other than that it was fine.

[Unnamed Mercenary]

Looks pretty good to me. I added an "at" to your first common rumor to change "plays the Quicksand" to "plays at the Quicksand". ...unless he's actually deceiving them or something. (It could then be reverted)

[Warren Castille]

Nah, that's a perfectly acceptable term for a performing artist. I've heard of "Big band playing Madison Square Garden" or "Comedian playing Carnegie Hall" before. It's odd, but it's valid.